Board Thread:Fan Fiction/@comment-36713614-20180906024200/@comment-32712012-20180906042529

Thanks for sharing these fanfics! I will definitely read some or all of them when I get a chance to do so.

EDIT: All right, I read some of the fanfics, and here are my opinions on them: Thanks for sharing your fanfictions with us! I'm excited to see what you'll do next.
 * Hope: I was a bit confused by this one at first, but I think that mostly what I found annoying about it was none of your doing, but was rather the fault of the Chima writers and their Great Illumination. Once I got past that, I found this interesting as a thought experiment.
 * Embers: This seems pretty good! It makes a lot of sense for Fluminox, and I don't think that the ending is cheesy so long as it's simply self-justification for Fluminox. I was extremely confused by Fangar's role, though. Could you help explain that?
 * Mechanics of Flight: This looks good so far! The characters seem well-written, and the story overall is good enough to make me want to write China fanfics of my own. One note that I'll make is that the gay couple wasn't the first apparent pairing that I saw in the story, and I might not have even expected it to be a thing without your note, so that might be good to know.
 * Illumination Day: Looks good so far! The characters look promising, and the story is well-written. I'm looking forward to seeing the rest of the story.