User blog comment:Fireheart318/A little help please ;)/@comment-25156409-20141225021656

Does the following paragraph from chapter 5 sound like Ezim didn't entirely mean to leave Sasha behind or he didn't entirely mean to cover her in mud. I'm trying to make it sound like the latter of the two. On the way back to the Spires, Ezim found himself riding next to a sabertooth called Sasha. He was getting annoyed about her rambling about the race and how the jumps were next to impossible. After a few more minutes, he quickened his pace and boosted, half-intentionally leaving yet another mud-spattered racer behind. 

P.S. Sasha's name is a reference to Warriors (the book series where my username came from). I'll try to explain it without spoilers. Here it goes. There's this evil cat called Tigerclaw, eventually, he's kicked out of ThunderClan and eventually finds a new mate, called Sasha. The connection is: Sabertooth TIGER and TIGERclaw.