User blog comment:Fireheart318/Fan Fiction/@comment-25156409-20141105003158/@comment-25156409-20141106001936

MAJOR EDIT!!!! Changed secondary character of first scene from Eris to Ethza and added the cave extension part as well as the two falling asleep. I had to change the plot because if Eris flew over, the entire plot would become messed up and I might turn into a canon murderer. I think Ethza will be Ezim's girlfriend or something.